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Jack Be

Jack be nimble, Jack be quick

        Jack        turn        back.

Jack jump, Jack burn, all in turn.
Ashes rest inside the urn.

Candlestick, “Your head is thick.
Wish you hadn’t lit the wick.”

Jump up and
                                        wait
‘til you fall down.

Wish you’d never left the ground.
Jack be simple, Jack be sheep.
Jack will never wake from sleep.
©2005-2009 ~Silent-Magnum
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Submitted: October 20, 2005
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A fun little adaption of Jack Be Nimble, I'm quite happy with this, as little as I write rhyming poetry.
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h-uh, thats actually really great for that poem XD I only know hte first lines of it. "the be nimble+quick part, he jumped over the candlistick" xD

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"wake up, sweetie."
"What, mommy?"
"I SAID DRESS THE FUCK UP"

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A little sadistic for a children's poem...
Not bad, just a tad sadistic...

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Mrar- very clever Magnum. I like!

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It gave me goosebumps!
i love nursery rhymes
and it's even better seeing other people's take on them
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c'est tres bonne
(wow my french is great)

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